Vanessa S

The Power Of One

In this essay, I will be talking about how this world is not perfect the way it is because there are tons of kids in this world that need our help and there are people that go to war for absolutely no reason. I do not like what is happening to our world and I am sure you don’t either.

If I were grown up and I had enough money to give people the stuff they needed, I would. Even though I am not old enough, I’ll try to give clothes, toys and money.

The silly things people are fighting about is just crazy! They should all just get along. Some people are dying because of war. It is just so cruel what they do to each other.

I love that some people are trying to put a roof over kids and adults heads but, some people are not even trying. I would like it if everybody tried. For example, I heard of a principal that works at a school where kids are homeless and she helps them put a roof over their heads by donating money for these children.

In conclusion, I am simply trying to say that the whole world needs our help. I really wish that our world will change sooner or later. I want our world to be as perfect as we wish it to be someday. My class could change the world together and you can to.

9 responses to “Vanessa S

  1. Angie Kakakios

    Vanessa, I am so happy to see how you care about making a difference! You are a very caring person and I believe you and your friends will do your best to make a difference in the world! Just believe in yourself to make this
    difference:)

  2. Miss Michelle

    I think it’s great that you want to make a difference. If everyone helps just a little, we can make a big difference! 🙂

  3. Rita

    I think it’s great that you are willing to make a difference in this world. Good for you! 🙂

  4. John Souvlos

    With people like you and your classmates the world will change, with the smallest of daily actions things will get better one step at a time. Do not ever let anybody tell you different. You go girl !!!

  5. Kevin Pozderec

    Great job Vanessa!

  6. Talia Atallah

    I love your essay. Great job Vanessa!

  7. Stephanie

    GOOD JOB!

  8. jack

    outstanding good job vanessa

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